The following opening sentence fell out of a writer's keyboard like an overweight sprinter out of the blocks, staggered through its middle em-dashed clause, and then crashed into a non-sequitured ditch, where it lay bleeding until its writer put it out of its misery, by writing the next sentence.
White suits, unsavoury politics and bad taste aside, he was pretty good at writing. As if the former even matter.
Tom Wolfe, who died Monday, was — as even those of us who did not share his politics and often deplored his taste and even doubted the fashion wisdom of all the white suits have to admit — one of the central makers of modern American prose.Let's translate, taking out a couple of 'evens':
White suits, unsavoury politics and bad taste aside, he was pretty good at writing. As if the former even matter.
I read that opening in the NYT and that's as far as I got, fearing it was a sign of things to come.
ReplyDeleteI haven't read his stuff (yet), but I always admired his fearless individuality. ('Fearless individuality' sounds like something the NYT would write, but it's the most accurate phrase I could come up with.)
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